major character changes

2026-05-10 00:25:36 +01:00
parent 3531636805
commit c67501e446
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--- a/play/do-not-open.org
+++ b/play/do-not-open.org
@@ -16,9 +16,9 @@
  <section class="play-console">
    <div class="play-console__screen">
      <p>Dear whoever needed a door,</p>
-      <p>I wrote "do not open" because I was embarrassed by how much I wanted to be found.</p>
-      <p>If you are here, please take the small ordinary blessing: may the next room be kinder than the last one.</p>
-      <p>- Etta</p>
+      <p>I wrote "do not open" because some feelings need a door before they can become words.</p>
+      <p>If you are here, take this small ordinary blessing: may love make the next room easier to enter.</p>
+      <p>- Future Z, age 40</p>
    </div>
  </section>
 </main>