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  <section class="play-console">
    <div class="play-console__screen">
      <p class="play-console__eyebrow">Family note</p>
-      <h2>The blue bowl</h2>
-      <p>I left the small blue bowl on the counter because it still smells faintly of coriander and Sunday. If anyone asks, it was never lost. It was waiting for someone to remember soup.</p>
-      <p>Under the bowl is a folded receipt. On the back, in pencil: "Morrow came by at 2:13. He said the hallway was kinder than last year."</p>
+      <h2>The small receipt</h2>
+      <p>Lima left a folded receipt on the counter. Not because it mattered, exactly, but because small ordinary things become evidence that a day happened.</p>
+      <p>On the back, in pencil: "Met in 2022. Engaged in Oct 2025. Soon, inshaAllah, married. Keep the ordinary days safe too."</p>
      <pre aria-label="Tiny ASCII bowl">
   ____
  /    \
 /______\
-   soup
+  2025
      </pre>
    </div>
  </section>